Out of the gate and off for a walk went Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy. He kept walking and walking in till a cat ran past. A black cat of the sorts. hairy Maclary From Donaldson's dairy Ran after that black and would not stop till he caught it. But all of sudden it turned around and hissed. Swiped this way and that. So Hairy Maclary From Donaldson's dairy called his friends. When they came they scared that black vat of the sorts away.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kyan,
ReplyDeleteIt's great that you managed to keep the writer style in your sentences, you added a bit of rhyme and also accomplish to maintain the quirky tone that characterised Hairy Maclary stories so well.
However, there are only 7 sentences in this activity and you are required to provide a minimum of 8 sentences. Could you kindly do that and let me know?
Kia Kaha,
Patricia