I would study and study tell I get to be a marine biologist or a veterinarian which means i would have to got to university and study the body and habits of all types of animals which will be worth it because I could easy money.
Kia ora Kyan, I found very cool that despite being so young you already have some clear ideas of what career to follow in the future. It would be great if you become a marine biologist as the world is in need of much help as possible to preserve our natural environment. Way to go Kyan! In your last sentence you wrote:"....which will be worth it because I could easy money." I din't quite understand what you mean here, could you kindly clarify? In order for you to gain full points for this activity I need you to make your ideas very clear in this post. I want you to think about doing shorter sentences and adding full stops to separate different key points because that would help you to make your ideas more specific and straightforward. Could you do that and let me know? Keep up the good work! Kia kaha, Patricia
Kia ora Kyan,
ReplyDeleteI found very cool that despite being so young you already have some clear ideas of what career to follow in the future. It would be great if you become a marine biologist as the world is in need of much help as possible to preserve our natural environment. Way to go Kyan!
In your last sentence you wrote:"....which will be worth it because I could easy money." I din't quite understand what you mean here, could you kindly clarify?
In order for you to gain full points for this activity I need you to make your ideas very clear in this post. I want you to think about doing shorter sentences and adding full stops to separate different key points because that would help you to make your ideas more specific and straightforward. Could you do that and let me know?
Keep up the good work!
Kia kaha,
Patricia