Willy here, as a commenter for the Learning Journey programme. Glad to see you join again for the Summer holidays. I see you have made some progress already with the activities and that's great - but what I would say for future tasks is that you need to add a brief, clear description of the activity. For some readers, they may have no idea what you're posting!
And always check your work before posting. But other than that, you're doing a good job getting the activities done. I wish you luck for the rest of the journey!
Hi Kyan, As Willy mentioned it is important that you briefly describe the activity so other people that follow you can understand, and more importantly engage with your posts. For the future I would like you to carefully review your answers before publish it and ask yourself the question: How can I make this more interesting? Another strategy is to get a feedback from someone else before post. Keep up with your good work!
Hi Kyan,
ReplyDeleteWilly here, as a commenter for the Learning Journey programme. Glad to see you join again for the Summer holidays. I see you have made some progress already with the activities and that's great - but what I would say for future tasks is that you need to add a brief, clear description of the activity. For some readers, they may have no idea what you're posting!
And always check your work before posting. But other than that, you're doing a good job getting the activities done. I wish you luck for the rest of the journey!
-Willy
Hi Kyan,
ReplyDeleteAs Willy mentioned it is important that you briefly describe the activity so other people that follow you can understand, and more importantly engage with your posts.
For the future I would like you to carefully review your answers before publish it and ask yourself the question: How can I make this more interesting? Another strategy is to get a feedback from someone else before post.
Keep up with your good work!
Kia Kaha,
Patricia