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Sunday, 17 December 2017

Activity 1 day 2

Two similarity between my house and the wharepuni Is that they both shelter your family and you can sleep in them two differences is that in my house there is heating, electricity and sliding doors ant the wharepuni has carvings every where and is almost completely hand made. hope the other players are doing well in their journey so far.
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  1. Patricia19 December 2017 at 11:58

    Hi Kyan,
    I really like how you approached this task and talk about the similarities such as shelter and sleep.
    I suggest that for activities like this one you can perhaps use lists or bullet points to make your text more clear. Also, for the future consider to add some images to make your posts even more interesting and eye catching.
    Keep up with your great work!
    Kia Kaha,
    Patricia

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