Hi Bob today we've found land are being here makes me sad because I had to leave all my family behind but the place is great it has food and shelter every where this is defiantly the work of Maui. Tell my family I love them.
From Kyan
Hi Kyan, Wonderful job here! I like how you wrote it to someone specific named Bob, it made your text more authentic. It is great how you wrote about how you feel as well as this makes your written more personal and engaging. Make sure that you read the activities carefully as this activity ask you to describe about your journey as well not only to describe New Zealand.
Hi Kyan,
ReplyDeleteWonderful job here! I like how you wrote it to someone specific named Bob, it made your text more authentic. It is great how you wrote about how you feel as well as this makes your written more personal and engaging.
Make sure that you read the activities carefully as this activity ask you to describe about your journey as well not only to describe New Zealand.
Kia Kaha,
Patricia